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Potential

is out there. You could turn this into quite interesting series I think. Animation could be much better though, find some voice actors (ask friends, or something). Try to make the plot a bit more sophisticated for the next one. You get a 6 for now but your 3rd episode could be quite good!

Amazing

This is one of the funniest newest submissions I've stumbled upon for a very long time :D
Tip of the hat to you kind sir, you made me laugh.

Awesome

You would think he'd run out of bullets eventually, though :D

On a more critical note, very well done, I love how dynamic your animation is. The level of detail was acceptable, bearing in mind that these are stick figures we're talking about. I really love the background music, really fits your work.

All in all, I like this. Violence, guns and knife... why wouldn't I, really?

Awesome

Thaaat explains everything...

I think I saw a glitch at one point though... minor stuff...

Right

I didn't quite enjoy the jerky animation, but that's the lack of onion tool I suppose. The music could've been better, put more effort in finding a decent piece in the audio portal next time.
The flow, however, was alright, I liked how you developed the story. It's also quite a decent piece of fbf (frame by frame) animation, mind you that. A firm 6 in my opinion. And I definitely see room for awesome improvement. Use the onion tool next time, spend some hours coulouring it in, fix the animations and you'll get a neat score.

Nice

'That is retarded'

Funny stuff :D Not entirely loltastic, but it does the trick.

aasimpy responds:

thanks, chris. i'm gonna add 3X more lol next time and see if that does it. hard to get the ingredients just right.

First?

Yeah, that's really impressive for a first and I can see greatness here should you choose to develop your flash skills any further. The animations weren't flawless but they had the natural flow of it so I'm guessing you're a good observer.

However, it's much too short and has a mysterious White Box, that's overlooking the fight. I do realise high framerate fbfs are daunting and challenging to make but you'll have to do more than this to achieve something.

Keep on going!

cherub-down responds:

thanks. i think i'll experiment with what im good at.. lol i didnt realise the box was gonna be in there.

Pretty alright

If you would've tidied the artwork up a bit and made the battle a tad less confusing, I'd give it more. Also, a few sound effects like sword clashing, arrow shooting, footsteps etc. could help. I liked that there is a pause and resume button (and the fact that they actually work).

wouterOfficial responds:

thx :D

my goodness :D

lol that was just brilliant. I watched it 10 times in a row :D

SpaceMonkey79 responds:

thanks yah =D
and take a look at my newest submits ...if you like my garbage xD

Nice ideas

I find the subtle symbolism and associations interesting... were there any? :D

Rutger responds:

some, like always ;D

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