is out there. You could turn this into quite interesting series I think. Animation could be much better though, find some voice actors (ask friends, or something). Try to make the plot a bit more sophisticated for the next one. You get a 6 for now but your 3rd episode could be quite good!
This is one of the funniest newest submissions I've stumbled upon for a very long time :D
Tip of the hat to you kind sir, you made me laugh.
You would think he'd run out of bullets eventually, though :D
On a more critical note, very well done, I love how dynamic your animation is. The level of detail was acceptable, bearing in mind that these are stick figures we're talking about. I really love the background music, really fits your work.
All in all, I like this. Violence, guns and knife... why wouldn't I, really?
Thaaat explains everything...
I think I saw a glitch at one point though... minor stuff...
I didn't quite enjoy the jerky animation, but that's the lack of onion tool I suppose. The music could've been better, put more effort in finding a decent piece in the audio portal next time.
The flow, however, was alright, I liked how you developed the story. It's also quite a decent piece of fbf (frame by frame) animation, mind you that. A firm 6 in my opinion. And I definitely see room for awesome improvement. Use the onion tool next time, spend some hours coulouring it in, fix the animations and you'll get a neat score.
'That is retarded'
Funny stuff :D Not entirely loltastic, but it does the trick.
thanks, chris. i'm gonna add 3X more lol next time and see if that does it. hard to get the ingredients just right.
Yeah, that's really impressive for a first and I can see greatness here should you choose to develop your flash skills any further. The animations weren't flawless but they had the natural flow of it so I'm guessing you're a good observer.
However, it's much too short and has a mysterious White Box, that's overlooking the fight. I do realise high framerate fbfs are daunting and challenging to make but you'll have to do more than this to achieve something.
Keep on going!
thanks. i think i'll experiment with what im good at.. lol i didnt realise the box was gonna be in there.
If you would've tidied the artwork up a bit and made the battle a tad less confusing, I'd give it more. Also, a few sound effects like sword clashing, arrow shooting, footsteps etc. could help. I liked that there is a pause and resume button (and the fact that they actually work).
my goodness :D
lol that was just brilliant. I watched it 10 times in a row :D
thanks yah =D
and take a look at my newest submits ...if you like my garbage xD
I find the subtle symbolism and associations interesting... were there any? :D
some, like always ;D
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