Sweet and Short
Yeah you just made my day.
Animations could use some work but for a short flash it's simple enough.
Sweet and Short
Yeah you just made my day.
Animations could use some work but for a short flash it's simple enough.
Amazing
I enjoyed this flash immensely. I think it's great that you can remember your dreams to an extent so that you can make cartoons about them later. By the look of it you had a vivid and interesting dream and you've got a decent flash. The animation could've been smoother at some points which is why I reduced my rating.
5/5
9/10
Thanks for your critique! i sometimes write down my better dreams so i can recall them later; and this was one of the more "real" feeling ones.
Psychedelic....
But for some reason I like it, it's fast, quick, has a sense of humour. Animations could've been smoother and you could've drawn some of the things yourself, looks like you've relied on pictures too much. Nice work as it's your first piece, I deem there's loads of good stuff to be expected from you. You should've put up a notice for the people with epilepsy though.
Keep at it!
Hmmm
Seriously? It loops, is more or less badly drawn, little or no animation, you can see bits of unfinished sketches or whatever it is... it even says "anal" at one point in the movie. I think I'm being generous here.
I'll do better on the animation
awesome!
LOL such a great job! At the beginning I thought "Meh, another of them music vids". Caught me off guard you did, appreciate that.
5/5
10/10
Keep it up!
well...
A bit too short for a trailer now wasn't it? Otherwise well done and appropriate music.
LOL
Well I found it funny. The music is... interesting so to say.
'Tis quite nice
Well this is quite original and nice assuming you're not far from begginer. Keep up the good work!
thx, depending on what u view as beginner, i made my other two cartoons like January but I havn't done much since... so yea, beginner I guess
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