At first I thought, what a nice mix, you should go and play in clubs and the sort. But then you drop these offbeat moments in which left me completely disconcerted. I mean if you do put such marvels in make it so they enhance your music... in this case they just put me off.
It would've been an 8 at the very least...
I have no musical talent what so ever.
I liked the variety of instruments, the dynamic flow and skilful beats. It should've been a bit less techno, but that's just my opinion. A nice piece of music!
Repetitive... this piece could use some excitement. I mean I understand you were aiming for something dull and oppresive... but even that demands some sort of variation. Listening to your piece, especially the middle of it, is kind of boring.
Still, I liked the theme and idea behind it. This could definitely work in a dark flash cartoon or game, IDK... I do see potential :D It reminded me a bit of Halo... the two first chords I suppose did the trick.
Nothing special I'm afraid. To me, the final high pitch techno bleep was misplaced and out of beat. You should work on this a bit more. I also don't think it loops.
At least you've put some effort in it.
A fine little loop, a bit on the blue side though. But I guess it's alright if you were striving for that emotion.
Nice work, keep it up!
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