tap5y's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Larkmart - Emergency]

Nice

'That is retarded'

Funny stuff :D Not entirely loltastic, but it does the trick.

aasimpy responds:

thanks, chris. i'm gonna add 3X more lol next time and see if that does it. hard to get the ingredients just right.

[NeWbIe Stick Fight]

First?

Yeah, that's really impressive for a first and I can see greatness here should you choose to develop your flash skills any further. The animations weren't flawless but they had the natural flow of it so I'm guessing you're a good observer.

However, it's much too short and has a mysterious White Box, that's overlooking the fight. I do realise high framerate fbfs are daunting and challenging to make but you'll have to do more than this to achieve something.

Keep on going!

cherub-down responds:

thanks. i think i'll experiment with what im good at.. lol i didnt realise the box was gonna be in there.

[Phantom Hourglass Battle]

Pretty alright

If you would've tidied the artwork up a bit and made the battle a tad less confusing, I'd give it more. Also, a few sound effects like sword clashing, arrow shooting, footsteps etc. could help. I liked that there is a pause and resume button (and the fact that they actually work).

wouterOfficial responds:

thx :D

[LSD song]

my goodness :D

lol that was just brilliant. I watched it 10 times in a row :D

SpaceMonkey79 responds:

thanks yah =D
and take a look at my newest submits ...if you like my garbage xD

[Birth of memory]

Nice ideas

I find the subtle symbolism and associations interesting... were there any? :D

Rutger responds:

some, like always ;D

[Into The Unknown]

Amazing

I enjoyed this flash immensely. I think it's great that you can remember your dreams to an extent so that you can make cartoons about them later. By the look of it you had a vivid and interesting dream and you've got a decent flash. The animation could've been smoother at some points which is why I reduced my rating.

5/5
9/10

CyborgCactus responds:

Thanks for your critique! i sometimes write down my better dreams so i can recall them later; and this was one of the more "real" feeling ones.

[JHS]

Hmmm

Seriously? It loops, is more or less badly drawn, little or no animation, you can see bits of unfinished sketches or whatever it is... it even says "anal" at one point in the movie. I think I'm being generous here.

Myukonana responds:

I'll do better on the animation

[Halloween Decorations]

'Tis quite nice

Well this is quite original and nice assuming you're not far from begginer. Keep up the good work!

OJSlaughter responds:

thx, depending on what u view as beginner, i made my other two cartoons like January but I havn't done much since... so yea, beginner I guess